tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.comments2007-07-23T09:26:19.624-05:00SOCHEnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-13956038172289261902007-07-23T09:26:00.000-05:002007-07-23T09:26:00.000-05:00Good stuff. Keep writing and do look in to getting published. Keep me posted when you add new stories.<BR/>GTAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-17246565838616320052007-07-01T15:10:00.000-05:002007-07-01T15:10:00.000-05:00ME TOO!!!Dream Nefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-21736061198795574642007-06-15T13:46:00.000-05:002007-06-15T13:46:00.000-05:00Only some one who doesn't appreciate having a brain in their skull would not like this to be the case but somehow it rarely seems to work out this way.Dream Nefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-59193054973800015432007-06-15T12:47:00.000-05:002007-06-15T12:47:00.000-05:00Well, it very tastefully written in a way that makes me say Well DAMN!!! I like it like that way too! What a coincidence! :)Dream Nefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-69212435351010426632007-06-15T12:39:00.000-05:002007-06-15T12:39:00.000-05:00Cool this is supposed to be before the last one. Right, Papi?Dream Nefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-43766982130175454502007-06-15T12:34:00.000-05:002007-06-15T12:34:00.000-05:00This part I like mainly because you are give a place and time frame reference with Tower Records (R.I.P.) and mentioning the blank tape section something else so late 1980's and early 1990's. Plus it so Boston style-I am getting homesick. No humidity out here in the summer just this perfectly balanced sunny and warm weather that creates some outstanding natural beauty.Dream Nefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-11264164247014925092007-06-12T06:41:00.000-05:002007-06-12T06:41:00.000-05:00Aight! I am going to take it nice and easy and comment on all of them with my second readings going first to last post. I use blogger to update my site's calendar. Glad to know someone else that use it differently.dreamnefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-26030504260622037602007-06-12T06:37:00.000-05:002007-06-12T06:37:00.000-05:00Your story is TIGHT (Cali slang for fly). With only a few word it convey the setting and the energy of the players.dreamnefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-76808181386999258822007-06-12T06:32:00.000-05:002007-06-12T06:32:00.000-05:00That back and forth is tight.Just a few writing style suggestions but perhaps just making it like 1: statement 2: statement to make it read easier and convey that it is a dialog not a mono log.dreamnefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-75548248511473216962007-06-12T06:27:00.000-05:002007-06-12T06:27:00.000-05:00Oops I spelled remember wrongdreamnefrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11711711239726742803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-79131468616128637162007-06-12T06:26:00.000-05:002007-06-12T06:26:00.000-05:00Well at least you were looking into her eyes first and foremost. remeber that game were you would stare at someone and the first one who looked away was the loser.Dream Nefrawww.nefrashop.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-45686598939494725012007-06-12T06:23:00.000-05:002007-06-12T06:23:00.000-05:00Kids do the craiest things. I am glad you are not afraid of them and at least remember how fun it is to act like one sometimes...Dream Nefrawww.nefrashop.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26385104.post-1166452200813620142006-12-18T09:30:00.000-05:002006-12-18T09:30:00.000-05:00Hey! What is going on with Yawkey? I wasn't hip to that! Fill me in!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com